Class 9 English Chapter 15: Words

Words is Chapter 15 of NCERT / CBSE Class 9 English. This page has the complete chapter notes across 3 topics , 82 practice MCQs with answers and explanations , 24 important short and long questions and 70 flashcards — all written to the NCERT / CBSE syllabus and free to read.

Words, Stanza by Stanza

Six stanzas, four comparisons and one argument: that words which merely arrive in quantity leave nothing behind, while a few said truly can do what a great many cannot.

What you will be able to do

  • Work through the poem stanza by stanza and state what each claims.
  • Identify the summer birds, the pilgrim, the weeds and the gaudy plant, and say what each contributes.
  • State the rhyme scheme and explain its effect.
  • Explain the repetition of the word words and of the opening condition.
  • Distinguish the feelings marked by the exclamation marks in stanzas 4, 5 and 6.

Key points

  • The poem has six stanzas of four lines each, and the poet is Charles Swain.

  • Words are compared to summer birds that depart and leave only empty air.

  • The heart is called a pilgrim upon earth, and words are said to be worth as little as weeds.

  • Stanza 3 is the turn: a little said truly can give deeper joy than hosts of words.

  • Words that reach the head are set against words that touch the heart.

  • The voice that cheers a lonely home usually has the fewest words to say.

  • Stanza 5 repeats the opening condition, with the world holding a feast — a hyperbole.

  • The last stanza compares words to a plant all blossom and no fruit.

Full explanation

Stanzas 1 and 2: What Words Are Not

Stanza 1 — the summer birds

Could words content the heart, the poem says, the heart would carry less; but words go off like summer birds and leave the air empty behind them.

The condition. If words could satisfy the heart — and the if is doing all the work. The poem opens by proposing something and immediately withdrawing it.

The comparison. Words are like summer birds. Since the line uses like, this is a simile.

And the comparison is exact in three ways:

  • summer birds arrive;
  • they are lovely while they are there;
  • they go when the season turns.

What they leave behind is empty air — not a loss, not a ruin, simply nothing. That is the poem's first and mildest complaint about words: they do not injure, they merely fail to remain.

Stanza 2 — the pilgrim and the weeds

The heart goes through the world a pilgrim, and finds at its moment of need that words are worth about as much as weeds.

The heart, a pilgrim upon earth. This is a metaphor — the line does not say the heart is like a pilgrim; it says it is one.

A pilgrim is somebody permanently travelling towards something they have not reached. Calling the heart a pilgrim therefore explains why words are wanted at all: a heart in that condition needs something from outside itself.

When it needs. Three words, easily passed over, and the hinge of the stanza. The failure described is not a general one. Words are found worthless exactly when they are required — which is worse than being worthless always.

As little worth as just so many weeds. Another simile. Weeds:

  • grow without being planted;
  • grow abundantly;
  • are worth nothing to the person tending the ground.

All three apply to easy words, which is why the comparison does more than insult.

Stanzas 3 and 4: What a Few Words Can Do

Stanza 3 — the turn

A little, said truly, gives a deeper pleasure than armies of words that get as far as the head and never reach the heart.

This is the stanza that keeps the poem from being a complaint about language.

The poem's real target is quantity. A little said defeats hosts of words — so words are not the difficulty. Too many words are, and untrue ones.

And truly said matters as much as a little. Brevity alone is not the virtue; a short lie would do nothing. The two conditions run together.

Head against heart. This is the distinction the whole poem rests on. A great many words can be understood — that is reaching the head. Very few are felt — that is touching the heart. Nothing about the first guarantees the second, and the poem's claim is that they are almost inversely related.

Stanza 4 — the lonely home

The voice that makes its bright way into a lonely house has usually the least to say — and how precious that little is!

Wins its sunny way — cheers a person up. The voice wins its way, which suggests something achieved rather than simply offered.

A lonely home to cheer. Notice what has happened to the poem. It began as an idea about language; now there is a person alone in a house, and somebody arriving. The argument has become a situation.

Hath oft the fewest words to say. Hath is an old form of has; oft means often.

But, oh! those few, how dear! The first exclamation mark of the poem, and the feeling behind it is admiration.

Stanzas 5 and 6: The Test, and the Plant

Stanza 5 — summoned to the test

Were the chest satisfied by words, the world might sit down to a feast — yet words, put to the proof, commonly satisfy least of all!

The return. The stanza reopens with the poem's first line almost unchanged — if words could satisfy — but the heart has become the chest. The repetition is deliberate: the poem is circling back to see whether its opening condition has grown any likelier. It has not.

The world might hold a feast. This is hyperbole — deliberate exaggeration for effect. Nobody supposes the planet would sit down to dinner.

But the exaggeration measures something real. If words genuinely satisfied, the change would not be small or private; it would be universal and immediate, because everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying. The size of the imagined feast is the size of what is being lost.

Summoned to the test. Called upon when it actually matters. Words are not being accused of failing in idle conversation — they fail on the occasion they were kept for.

Oft satisfy the least. Not fail to satisfy but satisfy least — worst of all the things one might have turned to.

Stanza 6 — the gaudy plant

They are like showy plants, flower all the way down to the root, whose thin nature will not bring on so much as a single fruit!

The poem's hardest image, and its last.

A simile again — like plants.

Gaudy means showy in a cheap way: bright, excessive, without taste.

All blossom to the root. This is the phrase to slow down over. The plant is not bare, withered or obviously useless. It is covered in flowers all the way down — display in place of substance, at every level, with nothing underneath.

Cannot grow one particle of fruit. Not little fruit. Not poor fruit. Not one particle. The failure is total, and it is hidden behind an impressive appearance.

Why this is the right image to end on. The summer birds merely left. The weeds were merely worthless. This plant actively looks like what it is not — and that is the real charge against empty words. They do not announce their emptiness; they arrive in bloom.

The Shape of the Whole

Rhyme

Only the second and fourth lines of each stanza chime:

Stanza Rhyming words
1 care / air
2 needs / weeds
3 impart / heart
4 cheer / dear
5 feast / least
6 show / grow

The scheme is therefore ABCB.

Its effect. A rhyme on every line would make a poem about the emptiness of fine language sound like fine language. Rhyming only twice a stanza keeps the movement steady and the attention on the argument — the form agrees with the content, which is rarely an accident.

Repetition

  • The word words occurs in almost every stanza.
  • If words could satisfy opens stanza 1 and returns in stanza 5.

Why repeat the word. Because the poem is about that word's subject. Each repetition puts words back at the head of a new claim — words depart, words are worth little, words reach the head, words satisfy least — so the reader is made to hear the same noun failing six different tests. And the repeated if is the method of the whole poem: a condition proposed and never met.

The three exclamation marks

Stanzas 4, 5 and 6 each end in one, and they are not the same feeling:

Stanza Feeling Why
4 Admiration Those few words, how dear
5 Frustration Words fail exactly when tested
6 Disillusionment Blossom that will never be fruit

Read in order they trace a descent — from delight in what words can do, to annoyance at what they usually do, to a settled loss of hope about what they pretend to do.

The poem's message

Not that words are worthless. That a few words meant sincerely are worth more than a great many that are not — and that the great many are the harder to see through, because they come covered in blossom.

Concepts and terms

Head and heart

The poem's central distinction. Words that reach the head are understood; words that touch the heart are felt. A great many can do the first and fail at the second.

The pilgrim

A metaphor for the heart: always travelling, always some distance from what it seeks. It is the image that explains why words are needed at all.

Summoned to the test

Called upon when it actually matters. Words may be plentiful in ordinary hours and useless in the hour that counts.

All blossom to the root

Display all the way down, with nothing underneath it. The plant is not bare — it is covered in flowers, and that is precisely the trouble.

ABCB

A rhyme scheme in which only the second and fourth lines of each stanza chime. It carries the argument steadily without drawing attention to the rhyme.

What Students Get Wrong

Did you know

The phrase that opens the poem — if words could satisfy the heart — comes back almost unchanged in stanza 5, where it is the chest that is to be satisfied.

Oft is simply an older, shortened form of often, and appears twice in the poem.

Only the second and fourth lines of each stanza rhyme, so half the poem's line-endings are left free.

Memory tricks

The four comparisons — Birds, pilgrim, weeds, blossom. — Stanzas 1, 2, 2 and 6.

The argument — Not what is said but how much. — Stanza 3 turns the poem: a little said truly beats hosts of words.

The three exclamation marks — Admire, then fret, then despair. — Stanza 4 admiration, 5 frustration, 6 disillusionment.

Practice MCQs with answers (28)

Q1 A reader says the poem condemns language altogether. Which stanza most directly refutes that? advanced
  • A Stanza 1, where words depart like summer birds
  • B Stanza 3, where a little said truly gives deeper joy than hosts of words
  • C Stanza 2, where words are worth as little as weeds
  • D Stanza 6, where the plant grows no fruit
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Answer: Stanza 3, where a little said truly gives deeper joy than hosts of words
Why:

The target is quantity and emptiness, not language.

Q2 A reader wants to know how long the poem is before starting on it. What should they be told? intermediate
  • A Six stanzas of four lines, by E. F. Hayward
  • B Four stanzas of six lines, by Charles Swain
  • C Six stanzas of four lines, by Charles Swain
  • D Eight stanzas of four lines, by Walter de la Mare
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Answer: Six stanzas of four lines, by Charles Swain
Why:

The name is printed under the last stanza.

Q3 Why is the comparison of words to summer birds described as exact? advanced
  • A Summer birds sing more loudly than other birds
  • B Summer birds return to the same place every year
  • C Summer birds build nests that outlast them
  • D Summer birds arrive, are lovely, and leave when the season turns
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Answer: Summer birds arrive, are lovely, and leave when the season turns
Why:

And what is left is empty air — simply nothing.

Q4 A student is asked to name the device in 'words, like summer birds, depart' and answers metaphor. Which correction applies? intermediate
  • A The word like makes it a simile
  • B The line names no second thing, so it is neither
  • C It is hyperbole, since birds cannot stand for words
  • D It is personification, since words are given flight
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Answer: The word like makes it a simile
Why:

A metaphor would have to say words are summer birds.

Q5 A student marks 'the heart, a pilgrim upon earth' as a simile. What is the objection? advanced
  • A A heart cannot be compared with a person at all
  • B The phrase is hyperbole rather than a comparison
  • C Pilgrim is used here in its literal sense
  • D The line states that the heart is a pilgrim, which makes it a metaphor
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Answer: The line states that the heart is a pilgrim, which makes it a metaphor
Why:

Neither like nor as appears in the line.

Q6 What does calling the heart a pilgrim explain about the poem? advanced
  • A Why the poet travelled abroad before writing
  • B Why the poem is set in summer
  • C Why words are wanted at all — such a heart needs something from outside itself
  • D Why the rhyme scheme is irregular
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Answer: Why words are wanted at all — such a heart needs something from outside itself
Why:

A pilgrim is permanently travelling towards what has not been reached.

Q7 Why do the words 'when it needs' sharpen the second stanza's complaint? advanced
  • A They show that the heart needs words only rarely
  • B They limit the complaint to the poet's own experience
  • C They indicate that the failure is temporary
  • D Words fail exactly at the moment they are required, which is worse than failing always
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Answer: Words fail exactly at the moment they are required, which is worse than failing always
Why:

The timing is what makes the failure count.

Q8 Which property of weeds does NOT apply to the words the poem describes? advanced
  • A That they grow without being planted
  • B That they grow abundantly
  • C That they are worth nothing to the gardener
  • D That they must be deliberately cultivated
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Answer: That they must be deliberately cultivated
Why:

Easy words come unbidden, which is half the trouble.

Q9 Assertion (A): The poem's target is quantity rather than language itself. Reason (R): Stanza 3 sets hosts of words above anything briefly said. advanced
  • A Both A and R are true, and R is the correct explanation of A
  • B Both A and R are true, but R is not the correct explanation of A
  • C A is true but R is false
  • D A is false but R is true
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Answer: A is true but R is false
Why:

It does the reverse, preferring little truly said. The assertion is sound, the reason false.

Q10 Why is 'and truly said' as necessary a condition as 'a little said'? advanced
  • A Because the phrase completes the line's rhythm
  • B Because truth is easier to express briefly
  • C Because a short lie would accomplish nothing
  • D Because the poem elsewhere praises long sincere speeches
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Answer: Because a short lie would accomplish nothing
Why:

The words must be few and they must be meant.

Q11 A speaker is understood perfectly and moves nobody. Which line of the poem describes that? advanced
  • A Words which reach the head but never touch the heart
  • B Words are of as little worth as just so many weeds
  • C The voice that wins its sunny way
  • D All blossom to the root
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Answer: Words which reach the head but never touch the heart
Why:

Being understood guarantees nothing about being felt.

Q12 What changes about the poem in stanza 4? advanced
  • A It abandons rhyme for the first time
  • B It addresses the reader directly
  • C It stops being an idea about language and becomes a situation with a person in it
  • D It begins to describe the poet's own childhood
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Answer: It stops being an idea about language and becomes a situation with a person in it
Why:

A lonely home, and a voice arriving to cheer it.

Q13 A student writes that the voice in stanza 4 speaks at length to comfort the lonely house. What does the poem actually say? intermediate
  • A It repeats the same few words until they are heard
  • B It arrives only in summer, like the birds
  • C It says nothing at all, and the silence is enough
  • D It wins its sunny way, and has oft the fewest words to say
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Answer: It wins its sunny way, and has oft the fewest words to say
Why:

And oh, those few, how dear.

Q14 Which feeling lies behind the exclamation at the end of stanza 4? advanced
  • A Frustration
  • B Disillusionment
  • C Amusement
  • D Admiration
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Answer: Admiration
Why:

Those few words, how dear.

Q15 How does stanza 5 differ from the poem's opening line? advanced
  • A The condition is stated as a certainty rather than a possibility
  • B The word words is replaced by speech
  • C The heart has become the chest; otherwise the condition is repeated
  • D The stanza abandons the conditional altogether
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Answer: The heart has become the chest; otherwise the condition is repeated
Why:

The poem circles back to see whether the condition has grown likelier.

Q16 A student calls the feast line an ordinary description of a celebration. What is it in fact? intermediate
  • A A simile, since the world is likened to a guest
  • B Hyperbole — deliberate exaggeration, since no planet sits down to dinner
  • C A metaphor for the poet's own household
  • D An antithesis between feasting and hunger
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Answer: Hyperbole — deliberate exaggeration, since no planet sits down to dinner
Why:

Not meant to be believed, and not meant to be taken literally.

Q17 What does that exaggeration actually measure? advanced
  • A The number of people who read poetry
  • B The poet's own appetite for company
  • C The scale of what is lost — everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying
  • D The length of the poem's argument
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Answer: The scale of what is lost — everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying
Why:

The size of the imagined feast is the size of the loss.

Q18 What does 'summoned to the test' mean, and why does it matter? advanced
  • A Examined by a teacher, so the poem concerns schoolwork
  • B Called upon when it actually matters — so words fail on the occasion they were kept for
  • C Repeated aloud, so the failure is one of memory
  • D Written down, so the failure is one of style
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Answer: Called upon when it actually matters — so words fail on the occasion they were kept for
Why:

The charge is not about idle conversation.

Q19 Why is 'oft satisfy the least' stronger than saying that words fail to satisfy? advanced
  • A Least is comparative: of everything one might turn to, words satisfy worst
  • B Oft means always, so the failure is absolute
  • C Least refers to the number of words rather than their effect
  • D The phrase is the poem's only piece of understatement
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Answer: Least is comparative: of everything one might turn to, words satisfy worst
Why:

A comparison, not a denial.

Q20 What does 'all blossom to the root' describe? advanced
  • A A plant whose flowers have fallen to the ground
  • B Display at every level, with nothing underneath it
  • C Roots that have grown above the soil
  • D A plant that flowers only once in its life
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Answer: Display at every level, with nothing underneath it
Why:

Gaudy means showy in a cheap way.

Q21 A student describes the plant in stanza 6 as withered. What has gone wrong? advanced
  • A The plant is described as growing only in winter
  • B The stanza concerns a tree rather than a plant
  • C The plant is covered in blossom — the emptiness is hidden behind an impressive appearance
  • D The stanza is about weeds rather than flowers
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Answer: The plant is covered in blossom — the emptiness is hidden behind an impressive appearance
Why:

Not one particle of fruit, and every flower in place.

Q22 Why is the gaudy plant the right image on which to end? advanced
  • A It is the longest of the four comparisons
  • B It returns to the season named in stanza 1
  • C It is the only image drawn from nature
  • D It is the only comparison in which the thing actively looks like what it is not
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Answer: It is the only comparison in which the thing actively looks like what it is not
Why:

Empty words arrive in bloom rather than announcing themselves.

Q23 A teacher asks which lines a reader should listen for when checking this poem's rhyme. Which is the answer? intermediate
  • A The second and the fourth of each stanza
  • B The first and the second
  • C The first and the third
  • D All four
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Answer: The second and the fourth of each stanza
Why:

Care and air, needs and weeds, feast and least.

Q24 Why does rhyming only twice a stanza suit this poem in particular? advanced
  • A It allows the poet to use longer words
  • B Rhyming every line would make a poem against fine language sound like fine language
  • C It was the only scheme available in the period
  • D It makes the poem easier to memorise
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Answer: Rhyming every line would make a poem against fine language sound like fine language
Why:

The form agrees with the content.

Q25 What is the effect of repeating the word words across the stanzas? advanced
  • A The reader hears the same noun failing one test after another
  • B It makes the poem sound conversational
  • C It supplies the rhyme at the end of each stanza
  • D It marks each change of speaker
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Answer: The reader hears the same noun failing one test after another
Why:

Words depart, are worth little, reach the head, satisfy least.

Q26 Which sequence correctly matches the exclamation marks to their feelings? advanced
  • A Stanza 4 frustration, stanza 5 admiration, stanza 6 disillusionment
  • B Stanza 4 admiration, stanza 5 frustration, stanza 6 disillusionment
  • C Stanza 4 disillusionment, stanza 5 admiration, stanza 6 frustration
  • D Stanza 4 admiration, stanza 5 disillusionment, stanza 6 frustration
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Answer: Stanza 4 admiration, stanza 5 frustration, stanza 6 disillusionment
Why:

Read in order they trace a descent.

Q27 Which statement best expresses the poem's message? advanced
  • A Silence is always preferable to speech
  • B A few words meant sincerely are worth more than a great many that are not
  • C Poetry succeeds where ordinary language fails
  • D Words are worthless and should be distrusted
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Answer: A few words meant sincerely are worth more than a great many that are not
Why:

And the great many are the harder to see through.

Q28 Three claims are made about the poem's comparisons. 1. Three of them use like or as. 2. One of them states an identity outright. 3. All four of them describe words. Which of them are correct? advanced
  • A 1 and 2 only
  • B 1 and 3 only
  • C 2 and 3 only
  • D 1, 2 and 3
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Answer: 1 and 2 only
Why:

The one that states an identity describes the heart, not words.

Important short questions (6)

Explain the comparison between words and summer birds, and say what it establishes.

Words are said to be like summer birds, which makes it a simile. The comparison holds in three ways: summer birds arrive, they are lovely while they are there, and they go when the season turns. What they leave behind is empty air — not a loss and not a ruin, but simply nothing. It establishes the poem's first and mildest complaint about words, that they do no injury at all and merely fail to remain. The stronger charges come later.

Why is the heart called a pilgrim, and how does the image affect the rest of the stanza?

It is a metaphor rather than a simile, since the line says the heart is a pilgrim. A pilgrim is somebody permanently travelling towards something not yet reached, so the image explains why words are wanted at all: a heart in that condition needs something from outside itself. The stanza then turns on the phrase when it needs, which is easily passed over and is the hinge of the argument. Words are not being called worthless in general — they are found worth as little as weeds exactly when they are required, which is worse than being worthless always.

Why is stanza 3 called the turn of the poem?

Because it prevents the poem from being a complaint about language. A little said, and truly said, can impart deeper joy than hosts of words — so words themselves are not the difficulty; too many of them are, and untrue ones. The stanza also supplies the distinction on which everything else rests, between words that reach the head and words that touch the heart. A great many can be understood; very few are felt, and nothing about the first guarantees the second.

Explain the hyperbole in stanza 5 and say what it measures.

The hyperbole is that the world might hold a feast if words could satisfy the chest — a deliberate exaggeration, since nobody supposes the planet would sit down to dinner. What it measures is the scale of what is being lost. If words genuinely satisfied, the change would not be small or private but universal and immediate, because everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying. The size of the imagined feast is therefore the size of the failure, and the stanza's other phrases sharpen it: summoned to the test means called upon when it matters, and satisfy the least means worst of everything one might turn to.

Describe the plant of the last stanza and explain why it is the right image on which to end.

It makes a gaudy show — showy in a cheap way — and it is all blossom to the root, meaning display at every level with nothing underneath, yet its poor nature cannot grow one particle of fruit. The failure is total and it is concealed. It is the right image to end on because it is the only comparison in the poem in which the thing actively looks like what it is not. The summer birds merely left, and the weeds were merely worthless; this plant deceives. That is the real charge against empty words — they do not announce their emptiness, but arrive in bloom.

Give the poem's rhyme scheme and explain why it suits this poem in particular.

Only the second and fourth lines of each stanza chime, which makes the scheme ABCB. The pairs are care and air, needs and weeds, impart and heart, cheer and dear, feast and least, and show and grow. It suits the poem because a rhyme on every line would make a poem about the emptiness of fine language sound like fine language. That would undercut its own argument. Rhyming twice a stanza keeps the movement steady and the attention on the claim being made rather than on the sound being made, so the form agrees with the content.

Long answer questions (2)

Work through the six stanzas of this poem, showing what each claims and how the argument develops.

Stanza 1. The poem opens with a condition it immediately withdraws: could words content the heart, it would carry less. Words are then compared to summer birds — a simile — which arrive, are lovely while they stay, and go when the season turns, leaving but empty air. This is the mildest of the poem's charges: words do no injury, they merely fail to remain.

Stanza 2. The heart is called a pilgrim upon earth, which is a metaphor, and it explains why words are wanted at all — a pilgrim is permanently travelling towards something not yet reached. Words are then found worth as little as weeds, which grow unplanted, grow abundantly and are worth nothing to the gardener. The crucial phrase is when it needs: the failure is dated to the moment of need, which is worse than a failure at any other time.

Stanza 3. The turn. A little said, and truly said, can impart deeper joy than armies of words that get as far as the head and never reach the heart. Three things happen at once here: the poem's target is revealed to be quantity rather than language; truth is made as necessary a condition as brevity; and the head-against-heart distinction is supplied, on which everything else rests.

Stanza 4. The voice that makes its bright way into a lonely house has usually the least to say — and how precious that little is! The poem now has a person alone in a house and somebody arriving — the idea has become a situation — and the first exclamation mark arrives, carrying admiration.

Stanza 5. The opening condition returns almost unchanged, with the chest in place of the heart, and the poem measures what the failure costs: if words satisfied, the world might hold a feast. That is hyperbole, but the size of the imagined feast is the size of the loss, since everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying. Summoned to the test, words oft satisfy the least — not merely inadequate but worst of everything one might turn to.

Stanza 6. The hardest image and the last. Words are showy plants, flower all the way down to the root, whose poor nature cannot grow one particle of fruit. The plant is not withered; it is covered in flowers, and the emptiness is hidden behind them.

The development. Four comparisons, each worse than the one before: something that leaves, something worthless, something that fails when tested, and finally something that deceives. The poem's message is not that words are worthless but that a few meant sincerely outweigh a great many that are not — and that the great many are the harder to detect.

Discuss the poem's construction — its rhyme, its repetitions and its exclamation marks — and show how each supports the argument.

The rhyme. Only the second and fourth lines of each stanza chime: care and air, needs and weeds, impart and heart, cheer and dear, feast and least, show and grow. The scheme is ABCB, and it is the right one for this poem specifically. A rhyme on every line would have made a poem about the emptiness of fine language sound like fine language, and the reader would have been enjoying the surface while being warned against surfaces. Rhyming twice a stanza keeps the movement steady and the attention on the claim.

It is worth noticing what the rhyme pairs are. Several of them set the poem's own opposition inside a single chime — feast against least is the whole of stanza 5 in two words, and impart against heart is the whole of stanza 3.

The repetitions. The word words appears in almost every stanza, and the phrase if words could satisfy opens both stanza 1 and stanza 5. The first repetition puts the same noun at the head of claim after claim: words depart, words are worth little, words reach the head, words satisfy least — so the reader hears one thing failing six different tests rather than six separate complaints.

The second repetition is the poem's method made visible. A condition is proposed — if — and is never met. Returning to it in stanza 5 is the poem checking whether anything has changed since stanza 1, and finding that nothing has.

The exclamation marks. Stanzas 4, 5 and 6 each end in one, and they are not the same feeling. Stanza 4 is admiration, for the few dear words that cheer a lonely home. Stanza 5 is frustration, that words fail exactly when they are tested. Stanza 6 is disillusionment, at blossom that will never become fruit.

Read in order they trace a descent: delight in what words can do, annoyance at what they usually do, and a settled loss of hope about what they pretend to do. That ordering is what gives a short poem its sense of movement, since the argument itself could have been stated in a single stanza.

Taken together these devices do what the poem recommends. It is six stanzas long, says one thing, and says it with restraint — a little said, and truly said.

Flashcards (23)

Who wrote this poem, and what is its shape?
Charles Swain. It runs to six stanzas of four lines each.
What does the poem compare words to in the first stanza, and why is the comparison exact?
To summer birds. The comparison is exact in three ways: summer birds arrive, they are lovely while they are present, and they go when the season turns. What they leave behind is empty air — not a loss and not a ruin, but simply nothing.
What is the poem's first and mildest complaint about words?
That they do not injure anybody — they merely fail to remain. Like the birds, they arrive pleasantly and leave nothing behind them.
Why is the heart called a pilgrim, and what kind of figure is that?
It is a metaphor, since the line says the heart is a pilgrim rather than that it is like one. A pilgrim is somebody permanently travelling towards something not yet reached, so calling the heart a pilgrim explains why words are wanted at all: a heart in that condition needs something from outside itself.
Why do the words 'when it needs' matter so much in the second stanza?
Because they narrow the complaint and sharpen it. Words are not being called worthless in general; they are found worth as little as weeds exactly at the moment they are required — which is worse than being worthless always.
Why are weeds a good comparison for words?
Because all three of their properties apply. Weeds grow without being planted, they grow abundantly, and they are worth nothing to the person tending the ground. Easy words come unbidden, come in quantity, and are of no use to anybody who needs something to grow.
Why is stanza 3 called the turn of the poem?
Because it keeps the poem from being a complaint about language. A little said, and truly said, can impart deeper joy than hosts of words — so words themselves are not the difficulty. Too many words are, and untrue ones.
Why is 'and truly said' as important as 'a little said'?
Because brevity alone is not the virtue being praised. A short lie would do nothing at all. The two conditions run together: the words must be few and they must be meant.
Explain the distinction between reaching the head and touching the heart.
Hosts of words reach the head, which means they are understood; very few touch the heart, which means they are felt. Nothing about being understood guarantees being felt, and the poem's claim is that the two are almost inversely related — the more words there are, the less likely any of them is to land.
What happens to the poem in stanza 4 that has not happened before?
It stops being an idea about language and becomes a situation. There is a person alone in a house and a voice arriving to cheer it — so the argument acquires a place and somebody in it.
What do the phrases 'wins its sunny way' and 'hath oft' mean?
Wins its sunny way means cheers a person up, and the verb wins suggests something achieved rather than merely offered. Hath is an old form of has, and oft means often.
Which is the first exclamation mark in the poem, and what feeling does it carry?
The one at the end of stanza 4 — but, oh! those few, how dear! The feeling is admiration.
How does stanza 5 return to the poem's opening, and what changes?
It reopens with the first line almost unchanged — if words could satisfy — except that the heart has become the chest. The repetition is deliberate: the poem circles back to see whether its opening condition has grown any likelier, and it has not.
What figure of speech is 'the world might hold a feast', and what does it measure?
Hyperbole — deliberate exaggeration for effect, since nobody supposes the planet would sit down to dinner. What it measures is the scale of what is being lost: if words genuinely satisfied, the change would be universal and immediate, because everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying.
What does 'summoned to the test' mean, and why does the phrase sharpen the charge?
It means called upon when it actually matters. The phrase sharpens the charge because words are not being accused of failing in idle conversation — they fail on the very occasion they were kept for.
Why is 'oft satisfy the least' stronger than saying words fail to satisfy?
Because least is comparative. Words are not merely inadequate; of everything a person might have turned to in that moment, words satisfy worst.
Describe the plant in the last stanza, and say what makes the image so hard.
It makes a gaudy show — showy in a cheap way — and it is all blossom to the root, meaning display at every level with nothing underneath. And it cannot grow one particle of fruit, so the failure is total. What makes the image hard is that the plant is not bare or withered: it is covered in flowers, and the emptiness is hidden behind an impressive appearance.
Why is the gaudy plant the right image to end the poem on?
Because it is the only one of the four comparisons that actively deceives. The summer birds merely left; the weeds were merely worthless. This plant looks like what it is not — and that is the real charge against empty words, since they do not announce their emptiness but arrive in bloom.
Give the poem's rhyme scheme with its six pairs.
ABCB — only the second and fourth lines of each stanza rhyme. The pairs are care and air, needs and weeds, impart and heart, cheer and dear, feast and least, and show and grow.
What is the effect of that rhyme scheme?
A rhyme on every line would make a poem about the emptiness of fine language sound like fine language. Rhyming only twice a stanza keeps the movement steady and the reader's attention on the argument, so the form agrees with the content.
Which words are repeated in the poem, and why?
The word words occurs in almost every stanza, and if words could satisfy opens both stanza 1 and stanza 5. The repetition of words puts the same noun at the head of one claim after another — words depart, words are worth little, words reach the head, words satisfy least — so the reader hears it failing six different tests. And the repeated if is the poem's method: a condition proposed and never met.
Distinguish the feelings behind the exclamation marks in stanzas 4, 5 and 6.
Stanza 4 is admiration, for the few dear words that cheer a lonely home. Stanza 5 is frustration, that words fail exactly when they are tested. Stanza 6 is disillusionment, at blossom that will never become fruit. Read in order they trace a descent from delight, through annoyance, to a settled loss of hope.
State the message of the poem in one sentence.
Not that words are worthless, but that a few words meant sincerely are worth more than a great many that are not — and that the great many are harder to see through, because they come covered in blossom.

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The Devices, and the Words About Words

Which figure of speech is at work where, four hyperboles to complete, the metre of the opening lines, six figurative phrases matched to meanings, a word map and a grid puzzle that is a first reading in disguise.

What you will be able to do

  • Identify each simile, the metaphor and the hyperbole in the poem, and explain what each communicates.
  • Complete the four hyperbole sentences and say why the rejected option is the plausible one.
  • Define syllable and metre, and mark the stresses in the poem's opening lines.
  • Match the six figurative phrases to their meanings.
  • Describe the word map and the grid puzzle, and say what each is for.

Key points

  • The poem uses three similes — summer birds, weeds, and plants that make a gaudy show.

  • Its single metaphor is the heart, a pilgrim upon earth.

  • Its hyperbole is the world holding a feast if words could satisfy the chest.

  • The hyperbole exercise asks for tonnes of, a mile, a decade and two seconds.

  • A syllable is a single unit of speech; a metre is formed of stressed and unstressed syllables.

  • The stresses in the first line fall on words, sat and heart.

  • Four of the six figurative phrases describe failure and only two describe words working.

  • The word map asks for meaning, synonyms, antonyms, a sentence and a sketch.

Full explanation

Which Device, and Where

Simile

A comparison that uses like or as. The poem has three, and all three are about words:

Line Words compared to
But words, like summer birds, depart Birds that come for a season
Words are of as little worth as just so many weeds Unwanted plants
Like plants that make a gaudy show A flowering plant with no fruit

Notice the pattern. All three are drawn from things that grow or fly, and all three end in disappointment: something that leaves, something worthless, something that deceives. The poem gets steadily harder on its subject while never changing the kind of comparison it uses.

Metaphor

A comparison that states an identity. The poem has exactly one:

The heart, a pilgrim upon earth

Not like a pilgrim. The heart is one — permanently travelling, permanently short of what it seeks.

Why this is the one that gets a metaphor. The similes describe words, which the poem holds at arm's length. The heart is not being held at arm's length; it is the thing the poem is on the side of. Stating the identity outright is a stronger and warmer move than comparing, and the poem keeps it for the one subject it sympathises with.

Hyperbole

Deliberate exaggeration for effect, not meant to be believed:

Were the chest satisfied by words, the world might sit down to a feast

Nobody supposes the planet would sit down to dinner. But the exaggeration is a measurement: it states how large the change would be if words worked — universal, because everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying.

Antithesis

Two opposites set directly against each other. The poem uses it twice:

  • words that reach the head but never touch the heart;
  • a little said against hosts of words.

Both are in stanza 3, which is why that stanza carries the argument.

Completing the Hyperboles

Four sentences, each with two options in brackets. The exercise wants the exaggerated one every time.

Sentence Answer Rejected
I have ___ things to do this weekend tonnes of lots of
The player missed the basket by ___ a mile an inch
My mother is so tired she could sleep for a ___ decade night
I will be back in ___ two seconds five minutes

Why the rejected options are the difficulty

Every one of them is perfectly sensible. A person can have lots of things to do, miss a basket by an inch, sleep for a night and return in five minutes.

That is exactly what makes them wrong here. A hyperbole is not an approximate statement — it is a deliberately impossible one, and its force comes from the listener knowing it is impossible. Missed by a mile tells you the shot was hopeless; missed by an inch tells you it was nearly in. The exaggeration carries information that the accurate version cannot.

The test. If somebody might reasonably take the sentence literally, it is not a hyperbole. Nobody sleeps for a decade.

Rhythm and Metre

The definitions

  • Rhythm gives a lyrical quality to a poem.
  • The rhythm of a line is described by its metrical shape.
  • One metrical foot is an unstressed syllable and a stressed one together.
  • A syllable is a single unit of speech — a beat of spoken language.

The worked lines

The stresses in the poem's first four lines fall like this:

If words could sa-tis-fy the heart — four beats, the stress falling on every second syllable. And leave but emp-ty air.

Students are then asked to listen to the teacher read the poem and underline the stressed syllables in the remaining lines.

What the exercise actually teaches

Two things worth separating.

First, that stress is not the same as importance. If is unstressed and words is stressed, but if is arguably the most important word in the poem. The pattern is a matter of sound, and it runs underneath the meaning rather than tracking it.

Second, that it is heard, not worked out. The instruction is to listen to the teacher read and then mark. A student who tries to reason out where the stresses ought to fall will get them wrong; a student who says the line aloud will get most of them right without knowing why.

Six Figurative Phrases

Phrase Meaning
Satisfy the heart Makes one happy
Depart and leave but empty air There is no outcome
Hosts of words Many words
Never touch the heart Does not appeal to our emotions
Wins its sunny way Cheers up a person
Plants that cannot grow fruit Makes no impact

What the list adds up to

Count them. Four describe a failure — no outcome, no appeal to the emotions, no impact, and too many words. Only two describe words doing something: making one happy, and cheering somebody up.

That imbalance is the poem's argument in miniature. Even the exercise's own vocabulary list is two-thirds about what words do not manage.

And each phrase is to be used in a sentence of the student's own — which is the harder half of the task, because a phrase understood can still be unusable until one has tried to put it somewhere.

The Word Map

Six words from the poem: depart, pilgrim, cheer, sunny, satisfy, heart.

For each, five things:

  1. A meaning in the student's own words.
  2. Synonyms.
  3. Antonyms.
  4. A sentence using the word.
  5. A quick sketch or symbol representing it.

The worked example

Word cheer
Meaning to shout out in approval, or to hearten somebody
Synonym comfort
Antonym sadden
Sentence The audience cheered her for a great performance
Sketch Sunshine, a sunflower, or a smiling face

Why the five parts, and why the sketch. A meaning alone can be memorised and never used. A synonym places the word among its neighbours; an antonym fixes its direction; a sentence proves it can be handled; and the sketch stores it by a second route altogether — a picture, not a definition. Six routes into one word is harder to lose than one.

Note also that the worked example's meaning (a loud shout of approval) and its synonym (comfort) are not the same thing at all. That is deliberate: it shows that a synonym need not match the primary sense, only a sense the word carries — which is how cheer works in the poem, where a voice cheers a lonely home without anybody shouting.

The Grid Puzzle

Before the poem, a word-search grid with seven clues, the worked example being summoned — my mother summoned me to introduce her friends.

Across:

  1. We eat food to satisfy our hunger.
  2. The train will depart from the station at five in the afternoon.
  3. The gardener was clearing the weeds to clean the flower beds.

Down:

  1. The view from the top of the hill was worth the difficult climb.
  2. The herbs and spices impart flavour to food.
  3. Flowers bloom in spring.
  4. We enjoyed a delicious feast after the ceremony.

Why the puzzle is not a warm-up

Every one of those seven words appears in the poem: satisfy, depart, weeds, worth, impart, bloom (as blossom), feast, and summoned.

So a student who has done the puzzle has already met the poem's vocabulary in ordinary contexts — a train, a gardener, a meal — before meeting it in poetry. When weeds then turns up as a measure of worthless words, the reader already has a gardener's weeds in mind to compare it against.

That is the whole method. The puzzle does not explain the poem; it stocks the reader with the plain meanings so that the figurative ones have something to push against.

Concepts and terms

Simile

A comparison made with like or as. This poem has three, and all three concern words: summer birds, weeds, and a plant that flowers without fruiting.

Metaphor

A comparison that states an identity rather than a likeness. The poem has one: the heart, a pilgrim upon earth.

Hyperbole

Deliberate exaggeration for effect, not meant to be believed. Were the chest satisfied by words, the world might sit down to a feast.

Syllable and metre

A syllable is a single unit of speech or beat. A metre is formed of stressed and unstressed syllables, and it gives a poem its lyrical quality.

Word map

A five-part record of one word: a meaning in the student's own words, synonyms, antonyms, a sentence and a quick sketch or symbol.

What Students Get Wrong

Did you know

Four of the six figurative phrases in the matching exercise describe words failing; only two describe words working.

The worked example for the word map is cheer, with comfort as a synonym and sadden as an antonym.

The grid puzzle's own worked example is summoned — a word the poem uses in stanza 5.

Memory tricks

Three similes, one metaphor — Birds, weeds, blossom — and a pilgrim. — The pilgrim is the one that states an identity.

Hyperbole — Take the impossible option. — Tonnes, a mile, a decade, two seconds — never the plausible one.

The word map — Meaning, synonym, antonym, sentence, sketch. — Five parts, one word.

Practice MCQs with answers (27)

Q1 A student lists four similes in this poem. How many does it actually contain, and what disqualifies the fourth? advanced
  • A Three — the reference to a feast is hyperbole, not comparison
  • B Three — the heart as a pilgrim states an identity and is therefore a metaphor
  • C Two — the weeds and the plants belong to one comparison
  • D Four is correct; all use like or as
Show answer
Answer: Three — the heart as a pilgrim states an identity and is therefore a metaphor
Why:

Summer birds, weeds and the gaudy plant are the three.

Q2 A student must decide quickly whether a comparison is a simile. Which test settles it, and which line of this poem fails that test? intermediate
  • A Look for a colon — the weeds comparison has none
  • B Look for like or as — the heart, a pilgrim upon earth, has neither
  • C Look for a verb of motion — the birds comparison has none
  • D Look for an exclamation mark — the feast line has none
Show answer
Answer: Look for like or as — the heart, a pilgrim upon earth, has neither
Why:

Which is precisely what makes it a metaphor.

Q3 What do the poem's three similes have in common? advanced
  • A All appear in the poem's first two stanzas
  • B All are drawn from things that grow or fly, and all end in disappointment
  • C All concern the heart rather than words
  • D All are drawn from the sea
Show answer
Answer: All are drawn from things that grow or fly, and all end in disappointment
Why:

Something that leaves, something worthless, something that deceives.

Q4 A reader asks why the heart, and not words, receives the poem's only metaphor. Which answer is best? advanced
  • A A metaphor cannot be used for an abstract noun like words
  • B The poet ran out of comparisons by the second stanza
  • C The similes hold words at arm's length; the heart is the subject the poem is on the side of
  • D The heart appears more often than words in the poem
Show answer
Answer: The similes hold words at arm's length; the heart is the subject the poem is on the side of
Why:

Stating an identity is a stronger and warmer move than comparing.

Q5 Which line of the poem is hyperbole? intermediate
  • A But words, like summer birds, depart
  • B The heart, a pilgrim upon earth
  • C Hath oft the fewest words to say
  • D The world might hold a feast
Show answer
Answer: The world might hold a feast
Why:

Deliberate exaggeration, not meant to be believed.

Q6 A student says the feast line is merely decorative. What does it actually do? advanced
  • A It describes a celebration the poet once attended
  • B It supplies the rhyme for the stanza
  • C It softens the criticism made in the previous stanza
  • D It measures how large the change would be if words worked — universal, since everybody has them
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Answer: It measures how large the change would be if words worked — universal, since everybody has them
Why:

The size of the imagined feast is the size of the loss.

Q7 Where do both of the poem's antitheses occur? advanced
  • A In stanza 1
  • B In stanza 5
  • C In stanza 6
  • D In stanza 3
Show answer
Answer: In stanza 3
Why:

Head against heart, and a little said against hosts of words.

Q8 A student completes the sentence 'the player missed the basket by an inch'. Why is that wrong for this exercise? advanced
  • A The exercise asks for the exaggeration, and an inch is the plausible option
  • B An inch is too small a distance to be measured
  • C The sentence needs a plural noun
  • D Missing by an inch is not possible in basketball
Show answer
Answer: The exercise asks for the exaggeration, and an inch is the plausible option
Why:

A mile says the shot was hopeless; an inch says it nearly went in.

Q9 Which set gives the four hyperbole answers? advanced
  • A Tonnes of, a mile, a decade, two seconds
  • B Lots of, an inch, a night, five minutes
  • C Tonnes of, an inch, a decade, five minutes
  • D Lots of, a mile, a night, two seconds
Show answer
Answer: Tonnes of, a mile, a decade, two seconds
Why:

The plausible option is wrong in every case.

Q10 Assertion (A): A hyperbole is not an approximate statement. Reason (R): Its force depends on the listener recognising that it could not be literally true. advanced
  • A Both A and R are true, and R is the correct explanation of A
  • B Both A and R are true, but R is not the correct explanation of A
  • C A is true but R is false
  • D A is false but R is true
Show answer
Answer: Both A and R are true, and R is the correct explanation of A
Why:

Nobody sleeps for a decade, and nobody is meant to think so.

Q11 A student asks what a syllable actually is, having assumed it means a short word. What is the answer? intermediate
  • A A word consisting of one part
  • B Any stressed sound in a line of verse
  • C A single unit of speech, a beat of spoken language
  • D A pair of words that rhyme
Show answer
Answer: A single unit of speech, a beat of spoken language
Why:

Satisfy is one word and three syllables.

Q12 Two syllables, one stressed and one unstressed, together make what? intermediate
  • A A rhyme
  • B A stanza
  • C A refrain
  • D A metre
Show answer
Answer: A metre
Why:

The rhythm is what gives a poem its lyrical quality.

Q13 In the line 'If words could satisfy the heart', which word is unstressed although it may be the most important? advanced
  • A If
  • B Words
  • C Heart
  • D Satisfy
Show answer
Answer: If
Why:

The condition it introduces is never met anywhere in the poem.

Q14 What does the mismatch between stress and importance show about metre? advanced
  • A It proves the poem was written carelessly
  • B It shows that unstressed words may be omitted
  • C It is a matter of sound, running underneath the meaning rather than tracking it
  • D It indicates where the reader should pause
Show answer
Answer: It is a matter of sound, running underneath the meaning rather than tracking it
Why:

Sound and sense are doing separate jobs.

Q15 How are students told to mark the stresses through the rest of the poem? advanced
  • A By counting the letters in each word
  • B By listening to the teacher read it and underlining what they hear
  • C By consulting a dictionary for each syllable
  • D By copying the pattern of the first four lines exactly
Show answer
Answer: By listening to the teacher read it and underlining what they hear
Why:

Reasoning it out produces worse results than saying it aloud.

Q16 Which phrase means that there is no outcome? intermediate
  • A Satisfy the heart
  • B Wins its sunny way
  • C Hosts of words
  • D Depart and leave but empty air
Show answer
Answer: Depart and leave but empty air
Why:

The summer-birds image lies behind it.

Q17 Which phrase means makes no impact? intermediate
  • A Never touch the heart
  • B Plants that cannot grow fruit
  • C Hosts of words
  • D Depart and leave but empty air
Show answer
Answer: Plants that cannot grow fruit
Why:

The last stanza's image, turned into a phrase.

Q18 A student counts the six figurative phrases by what they describe. What does the count reveal? advanced
  • A Four describe failure and only two describe words working
  • B All six describe failure
  • C Three describe failure and three describe success
  • D Five describe success and one failure
Show answer
Answer: Four describe failure and only two describe words working
Why:

The exercise's own vocabulary carries the poem's argument.

Q19 Why is writing a sentence with each phrase harder than matching it to a meaning? advanced
  • A The sentences must rhyme with the poem
  • B Each phrase may be used only once
  • C A phrase can be recognised and still be unusable until one knows what situation it fits
  • D The phrases have no meaning outside the poem
Show answer
Answer: A phrase can be recognised and still be unusable until one knows what situation it fits
Why:

Recognising and using are different kinds of knowledge.

Q20 Which five things must a word map contain? intermediate
  • A Meaning, spelling, pronunciation, origin and a sentence
  • B Synonyms, antonyms, rhymes, a sentence and a sketch
  • C Meaning, a rhyme, a synonym, a stanza and a sketch
  • D Meaning, synonyms, antonyms, a sentence and a sketch
Show answer
Answer: Meaning, synonyms, antonyms, a sentence and a sketch
Why:

Six words are to be mapped, including pilgrim and depart.

Q21 Why does the word map include a sketch? advanced
  • A It makes the notebook look attractive
  • B It stores the word by a second route — a picture rather than a definition
  • C It replaces the need for a sentence
  • D It shows how the word is spelt
Show answer
Answer: It stores the word by a second route — a picture rather than a definition
Why:

Several routes into one word are harder to lose than one.

Q22 In the worked word map, the meaning of cheer is a loud shout, but the synonym is comfort. What does that teach? advanced
  • A The worked example contains an error
  • B A synonym need match only a sense the word carries, not its primary one
  • C Synonyms and meanings are always identical
  • D Comfort and shouting mean the same thing
Show answer
Answer: A synonym need match only a sense the word carries, not its primary one
Why:

And it is the second sense that works in the poem.

Q23 A puzzle clue reads that a mother called somebody in to meet her friends. Which word does it point to, and why is the word worth noticing? intermediate
  • A Satisfy — the first of the across answers
  • B Depart — the clue concerns somebody leaving
  • C Feast — the friends were being entertained
  • D Summoned — the worked example, and a word the poem itself uses
Show answer
Answer: Summoned — the worked example, and a word the poem itself uses
Why:

Every answer in the grid is a word the poem will use.

Q24 A teacher is asked why the grid puzzle comes before the poem. What is the best answer? advanced
  • A Every answer is a word of the poem, met first in an ordinary context
  • B It fills the time while the class settles
  • C It tests spelling rather than vocabulary
  • D It contains none of the poem's words, so it gives no answers away
Show answer
Answer: Every answer is a word of the poem, met first in an ordinary context
Why:

A train, a gardener and a meal, before poetry.

Q25 Which set gives three of the grid puzzle's answers? advanced
  • A Satisfy, blossom, pilgrim
  • B Depart, cheer, sunny
  • C Satisfy, depart, weeds
  • D Weeds, heart, gaudy
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Answer: Satisfy, depart, weeds
Why:

Those three are the across clues.

Q26 What does the grid puzzle give a reader before the poem begins? advanced
  • A A summary of the poem's argument
  • B The rhyme scheme of the poem
  • C Plain meanings for the words the poem will use figuratively
  • D The poet's name and dates
Show answer
Answer: Plain meanings for the words the poem will use figuratively
Why:

So the figurative senses have something to push against.

Q27 Three claims are made about the figures of speech in this poem. 1. It contains three similes. 2. Its only metaphor describes words. 3. Both of its antitheses fall in one stanza. Which of them are correct? advanced
  • A 1 and 3 only
  • B 1 and 2 only
  • C 2 and 3 only
  • D 1, 2 and 3
Show answer
Answer: 1 and 3 only
Why:

The metaphor describes the heart, and the antitheses are both in stanza 3.

Important short questions (6)

Name the three similes in the poem, and say what they have in common.

Words are like summer birds that depart; words are of as little worth as just so many weeds; and words are like plants that make a gaudy show. All three use like or as, which is what makes them similes. What they have in common is that each is drawn from something that grows or flies, and each ends in disappointment — something that leaves, something worthless, and something that deceives. The poem grows steadily harder on its subject while never changing the kind of comparison it uses.

Why does the heart, and not words, receive the poem's only metaphor?

Because a metaphor states an identity rather than a likeness, and stating an identity is the stronger and warmer of the two moves. The similes all describe words, which the poem holds at arm's length and finally accuses of deceiving; the heart is the subject the poem is on the side of, and it alone is given the outright claim — the heart is a pilgrim upon earth. The distribution of the devices therefore tracks the poem's sympathies exactly.

Give the four answers to the hyperbole exercise and explain why the rejected options are the difficulty.

Tonnes of things to do; missed the basket by a mile; could sleep for a decade; back in two seconds. The rejected options — lots of, an inch, a night, five minutes — are the difficulty because every one of them is perfectly sensible, and a student looking for a reasonable answer will choose it. That plausibility is exactly what disqualifies them. A hyperbole is not an approximate statement but a deliberately impossible one, and its force depends on the listener recognising the impossibility; missed by a mile says the shot was hopeless, where missed by an inch says it nearly went in.

Define syllable and metre, and explain what the stress exercise teaches beyond the marks themselves.

A syllable is a single unit of speech, a beat of spoken language; a metre is formed by a stressed and an unstressed syllable, and the rhythm gives a poem its lyrical quality. Beyond the marks, the exercise teaches two things. The first is that stress is not importance: in the opening line if is unstressed and words is stressed, yet if is arguably the poem's most important word, so the pattern runs underneath the meaning rather than tracking it. The second is that it is heard rather than worked out — the instruction is to listen to the teacher read and then mark, because a student who reasons about where stresses ought to fall will get them wrong.

Give the six figurative phrases with their meanings, and say what the set reveals.

Satisfy the heart means makes one happy. Depart and leave but empty air means there is no outcome. Hosts of words means many words. Never touch the heart means does not appeal to our emotions. Wins its sunny way means cheers up a person. And plants that cannot grow fruit means makes no impact. What the set reveals is a balance: four of the six describe a failure and only two describe words doing anything, so even the exercise's vocabulary list is two-thirds about what words do not manage. The poem's argument is present in miniature in its own glossary.

Explain why the grid puzzle printed before the poem is more than a warm-up.

Because every one of its answers is a word the poem uses — satisfy, depart, weeds, worth, impart, bloom as blossom, feast, and the worked example summoned. A student who has done the puzzle has already met the poem's vocabulary in flatly ordinary settings: a hunger, a train timetable, a gardener clearing beds, a meal after a ceremony. When weeds then reappears as the measure of worthless words, the reader has a gardener's weeds already in mind to set it against. The puzzle does not explain the poem; it stocks the reader with plain meanings so that the figurative ones have something to push against.

Long answer questions (2)

Identify the figures of speech this poem uses, and explain what each contributes to its argument.

Simile — three of them. Words are like summer birds that depart; they are of as little worth as just so many weeds; and they are like plants that make a gaudy show. Each uses like or as, and each is drawn from something that grows or flies. What they contribute is a sequence of increasingly severe charges: the birds merely leave, the weeds are simply worthless, and the flowering plant actively misleads. The poem therefore escalates without ever changing its method of comparison, which keeps the argument from appearing to strain.

Metaphor — one only. The heart, a pilgrim upon earth. It contributes the reason the whole poem exists: a pilgrim is permanently travelling towards something not yet reached, so a heart in that condition needs something from outside itself, and that need is what words are failing to meet. Its being a metaphor rather than a simile also matters. The similes hold words at arm's length; the heart is stated outright to be a pilgrim, which is a warmer move, and the poem reserves it for the one subject it sympathises with.

Hyperbole — one, in stanza 5. Were the chest satisfied by words, the world might sit down to a feast. Nobody supposes the planet would sit down to dinner, and nobody is meant to. What it contributes is a measurement: it states how large the change would be if words worked, and the answer is universal, since everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying. The size of the imagined feast is the size of what is being lost.

Antithesis — twice, both in stanza 3. Words that reach the head are set against words that touch the heart, and a little said is set against hosts of words. These contribute the distinction the poem rests on and the concession that saves it from being an attack on language, which is why stanza 3 is the turn.

Taken together the devices divide the labour neatly. The similes accuse, the metaphor explains why the accusation matters, the hyperbole measures the cost, and the antitheses state the actual claim.

Describe the vocabulary work of this lesson — the phrases, the word map and the puzzle — and explain what each is designed to do.

The six phrases. Satisfy the heart means makes one happy. Depart and leave but empty air means there is no outcome. Hosts of words means many words. Never touch the heart means does not appeal to our emotions. Wins its sunny way means cheers up a person. And plants that cannot grow fruit means makes no impact.

The matching is the easy half. Each phrase must then be used in a sentence of the student's own, which is considerably harder, because a phrase can be recognised and still be unusable — knowing what a phrase means is not the same as knowing what kind of situation it fits.

The set also carries an argument. Four of the six describe a failure and only two describe words doing anything at all, so the poem's case is present in miniature in its own glossary.

The word map. Six words — depart, pilgrim, cheer, sunny, satisfy, heart — each to be given a meaning in the student's own words, synonyms, antonyms, a sentence and a quick sketch. The worked example is cheer: meaning, to give a loud shout of approval; synonym, comfort; antonym, sadden; sentence, the audience cheered her for a great performance; sketch, sunshine or a smiling face.

The five parts are five separate routes into one word. A meaning can be memorised and never used; a synonym places the word among its neighbours; an antonym fixes its direction; a sentence proves it can be handled; and a sketch stores it as a picture rather than a definition. Several routes are harder to lose than one.

The example also contains a useful mismatch. A loud shout is not a comfort, so the synonym does not match the stated meaning — which shows that a synonym need only match some sense the word carries. It is the second sense that operates in the poem, where a voice cheers a lonely home without anybody raising it.

The grid puzzle. Seven words to be found from clues, with summoned worked out as an example: satisfy, depart and weeds across, and worth, impart, bloom and feast down.

Every one of them is a word of the poem. A student who has done the puzzle has met the vocabulary in ordinary settings — a hunger, a train, a gardener, a meal — before meeting it in poetry, so when weeds returns as the measure of worthless words there is a gardener's weeds already in mind. The puzzle does not explain anything; it stocks the reader with plain meanings so the figurative ones have something to push against.

Flashcards (23)

Name the three similes in the poem.
Words, like summer birds, depart; words are of as little worth as just so many weeds; and like plants that make a gaudy show. Each uses like or as.
What pattern runs through the three similes?
All three are drawn from things that grow or fly, and all three end in disappointment — something that leaves, something worthless, and something that deceives. The poem gets steadily harder on its subject while never changing the kind of comparison it uses.
What is the poem's single metaphor, and why is it a metaphor?
The heart, a pilgrim upon earth. It is a metaphor because it states an identity rather than a likeness — the heart is a pilgrim, not like one.
Why does the heart get the metaphor while words get the similes?
Because the similes describe words, which the poem holds at arm's length, whereas the heart is the thing the poem is on the side of. Stating an identity outright is a stronger and warmer move than comparing, and the poem keeps it for the one subject it sympathises with.
Identify the hyperbole in the poem and explain what it measures.
Were the chest satisfied by words, the world might sit down to a feast. Nobody supposes the planet would sit down to dinner, so it is a deliberate exaggeration; but it functions as a measurement of how large the change would be if words worked. It would be universal, because everybody has words and everybody needs satisfying.
Give the two antitheses in the poem and say where they occur.
Words that reach the head but never touch the heart, and a little said set against hosts of words. Both are in stanza 3, which is why that stanza carries the argument.
Give the four answers to the hyperbole exercise.
I have tonnes of things to do this weekend; the player missed the basket by a mile; my mother is so tired she could sleep for a decade; and I will be back in two seconds.
Why are the rejected options in the hyperbole exercise the difficulty?
Because every one of them is perfectly sensible — a person can have lots of things to do, miss a basket by an inch, sleep for a night and return in five minutes. That plausibility is exactly what disqualifies them, since a hyperbole is not an approximate statement but a deliberately impossible one.
What does a hyperbole convey that an accurate statement cannot?
Its force comes from the listener knowing it is impossible. Missed by a mile tells you the shot was hopeless; missed by an inch tells you it nearly went in. The exaggeration carries information about degree that the accurate version does not.
Give a test for whether a sentence is a hyperbole.
If somebody might reasonably take it literally, it is not one. Nobody sleeps for a decade, so that sentence is safe; somebody might genuinely sleep for a night, so that one is not a hyperbole at all.
Define rhythm, metre and syllable as the lesson gives them.
Rhythm gives a lyrical quality to a poem, and the rhythm of a line is described by its metrical shape. One metrical foot is an unstressed syllable and a stressed one together. A syllable is a single unit of speech, a beat of spoken language.
Where do the stresses fall in the poem's first two lines?
If words could sa-tis-fy the heart — stressed on words, on the first syllable of satisfy, on the third, and on heart. The heart might find less care — stressed on heart, on find and on care.
Why does the lesson say that stress is not the same as importance?
Because the two often disagree. In the opening line if is unstressed and words is stressed, yet if is arguably the most important word in the whole poem, since the condition it introduces is never met. The stress pattern is a matter of sound, and it runs underneath the meaning rather than tracking it.
How are students told to find the remaining stresses, and why does the method matter?
By listening to the teacher read the poem and then underlining what they heard. The method matters because a student who tries to reason out where the stresses ought to fall will get them wrong, whereas a student who says the line aloud will get most of them right without being able to explain why.
Give the six figurative phrases and their meanings.
Satisfy the heart means makes one happy. Depart and leave but empty air means there is no outcome. Hosts of words means many words. Never touch the heart means does not appeal to our emotions. Wins its sunny way means cheers up a person. And plants that cannot grow fruit means makes no impact.
What does the balance of those six phrases reveal?
That four of the six describe a failure — no outcome, no appeal to the emotions, no impact, and too many words — while only two describe words doing something. Even the exercise's own vocabulary list is two-thirds about what words fail to manage, which is the poem's argument in miniature.
Why is using each phrase in a sentence of one's own the harder half of that exercise?
Because a phrase can be understood and still be unusable. Matching it to a meaning shows only that it has been recognised; putting it somewhere requires knowing what kind of situation it fits, which is a different and later kind of knowledge.
Which six words are to be given word maps, and what five things must each map contain?
Depart, pilgrim, cheer, sunny, satisfy and heart. Each map needs a meaning in the student's own words, synonyms, antonyms, a sentence using the word, and a quick sketch or symbol representing it.
Give the worked example of the word map.
The word is cheer. Its meaning is to give a loud shout of approval or encouragement; its synonym is comfort; its antonym is sadden; the sentence is that the audience cheered her for a great performance; and the sketch is a picture of sunshine, a sunflower or a smiling face.
Why does the word map have five parts, and why include a sketch?
Because a meaning alone can be memorised and never used. A synonym places the word among its neighbours, an antonym fixes its direction, a sentence proves it can be handled, and a sketch stores it by a second route altogether — as a picture rather than a definition. Several routes into one word are harder to lose than one.
Why is it useful that the worked example's meaning and its synonym do not match?
Because it shows that a synonym need not match a word's primary sense, only some sense the word carries. Cheer is glossed as a loud shout of approval, and its synonym is comfort, which is quite different — and it is the second sense that operates in the poem, where a voice cheers a lonely home without anybody shouting.
Give the seven answers to the grid puzzle, with the worked example.
The worked example is summoned. Across: satisfy our hunger, the train will depart, and the gardener was removing the weeds. Down: the view was worth the climb, herbs and spices impart flavour, flowers bloom in spring, and we enjoyed a delicious feast.
Why is the grid puzzle not simply a warm-up?
Because every one of its answers is a word of the poem — satisfy, depart, weeds, worth, impart, bloom as blossom, feast, and summoned. A student who has done it has already met the poem's vocabulary in ordinary contexts, a train, a gardener, a meal, before meeting it in poetry. It stocks the reader with plain meanings so that the figurative ones have something to push against.

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The Skills Work of This Poem

A listening task in which exactly four of six statements are true, eight quotations to choose between, a five-paragraph essay with a counterargument built into it, a game played without speech, and a second poem about weighing what you say.

What you will be able to do

  • Identify the four true statements in the listening task and say why the other two fail.
  • Attribute each of the eight quotations and explain what the speaking task asks for.
  • Set out the five paragraphs of the essay and the job of each.
  • Explain why the counterargument paragraph is the hard one.
  • Describe the Non-verbal game and the second poem, Weigh Your Words.

Key points

  • The listening passage is a conversation between a girl and a boy about a declamation contest.

  • Exactly four of the six statements are true and two are false.

  • The girl was excited to take part, and the boy doubted the topic's suitability.

  • She said people prefer to keep personal experiences to themselves, and he had not known what body language contributes.

  • The essay runs to five paragraphs: introduction, two body paragraphs, a counterargument and a conclusion.

  • Each body paragraph opens with a topic sentence and is joined to the next by transition words.

  • The Non-verbal game is played in groups of six, with thirty seconds to enact an expression or gesture.

  • An eighteenth-century French priest is honoured as the father of sign language and of education for deaf children.

Full explanation

Listen and Respond

A girl and a boy are in conversation. Six statements are printed, and the instruction is to mark the four that are true.

The four true ones

Statement
1 The girl was eager to take part in the declamation contest
2 The boy was not sure the chosen topic would do
3 She explained that people prefer to keep their own experience to themselves
4 The boy did not know what part was played body language plays in reflecting a speaker's confidence

The two false ones

Statement Why it fails
5 Body language had an insignificant role, according to the girl She argued the opposite
6 She had already issued the book on body language earlier She had not

Notice how the two false statements are built. Neither invents anything. Statement 5 takes a subject the girl genuinely discussed and reverses her position on it; statement 6 takes a book that genuinely exists in the conversation and moves it in time. A listener who remembers only body language was mentioned and there was a book will mark both true — and be wrong twice.

What the task is really testing

Not whether the topics came up, but who held which view and when things happened. That is a much harder thing to hear, because the topic registers immediately and the attribution has to be held.

And the number is given in advance: exactly four. A listener who has marked five knows without being told that one is wrong, and can go back. The count is a built-in check.

Speaking: Eight Quotations

Students read all eight, select the one they like most, and then explain it and give the reason for the choice. They may also talk about a connected personal experience.

Speaker The quotation's claim
Gautama Buddha Whatever we say ought to be picked carefully, since others will hear it and be swayed for good or ill
Martin Luther King, Jr. What stays with us at the last is not what our enemies said but what our friends did not
Swami Vivekananda We are what our thoughts have made us, so take care what you think
Mahatma Gandhi A heart with no words in prayer is worth more than words with no heart behind them
Kalpana Chawla May you have the vision to find the path from dreams to success, the nerve to set out on it and the staying power to keep to it
Homer Words empty as the wind are best left unsaid
Emily Dickinson Saying nothing sometimes says the most
Walt Whitman The words of my book nothing, the drift of it everything

How they group

Read together, they are not eight versions of one idea.

  • Gandhi, Dickinson and King all say that absence can speak — a heart without words, saying nothing, the silence of friends. King's is the sharpest, because his silence is a failure, not a virtue.
  • Buddha and Homer are about restraint: choose carefully, and leave the empty ones unsaid.
  • Vivekananda and Whitman move behind the words altogether, to thought and to drift — what a book is about rather than what it says.
  • Chawla's is the outlier, and it is worth noticing. It says nothing about words at all; it is a wish for somebody else. Including it lets a student choose a quotation because of what it does rather than what it argues.

The cues

I chose … because …, I selected … since …, I decided on … due to …, I picked … as …, I settled for … because …

Five openings, and every one of them ends in a reason. The task will not accept a preference by itself.

Writing: The Five-Paragraph Essay

The essay is on one quotation from the speaking activity.

Paragraph What it must do
1. Introduction Mention the quotation and the speaker; briefly say why it appealed to you; state the purpose of the essay
2 and 3. Body One specific point each; open with a topic sentence; provide evidence, examples or narratives; join smoothly with transition words
4. Counterargument Think of a possible criticism of the quotation; give the reason that criticism is baseless
5. Conclusion Summarise the main points, and end with a statement that leaves a lasting impression

Transition words named: in addition to…, for instance…, however…, consequently…, finally…

Why paragraph 4 is the hard one

Everything else in the structure can be done by a writer who agrees with the quotation. Paragraph 4 cannot.

An essay that only defends its quotation has argued with nobody. It will read as a set of reasons for something the reader was never invited to doubt — and a reader who did doubt it will have put the essay down before paragraph 3.

Stating the strongest objection changes the piece. It tells the reader that the writer has been outside their own position and come back, which is the difference between praise and a case.

And it cannot be faked. A weak objection, easily knocked down, is worse than none — it advertises that the writer either could not think of a real one or did not want to. The paragraph requires genuinely working out what somebody who disagreed would say.

Why the transition words matter

Each one marks a relation, and the wrong one misdirects:

  • in addition to — more of the same;
  • for instance — an example of what was just claimed;
  • however — a turn against what was just said;
  • consequently — a result of it;
  • finally — the last item.

A reader takes the signal before reading the sentence, so however at the head of a paragraph that agrees with the last one leaves them briefly lost.

Learning Beyond the Text

The Non-verbal game

In groups of six:

  1. Each student writes or draws an expression on one slip, and a gesture on another.
  2. The slips are jumbled and kept face down.
  3. Players pick in turns and enact what they get in 30 seconds.
  4. The first person to identify it scores 10 points.
  5. Two rounds decide the Non-verbal Champion.

The lesson gives tired as an example of an expression and united as an example of a gesture, and notes that the game is like Dumb Charades, a word-guessing game where players act out words, phrases or titles using gestures and body language without speaking.

What it has to do with the poem. The poem argues that a great many words can fail to communicate. The game removes words entirely and asks whether anything gets through — and it does, in thirty seconds, well enough to score. That is a stronger version of the poem's own claim than the poem makes.

And notice who scores. Points go to whoever identifies it first, not to the person acting. The game rewards reading somebody as much as expressing oneself, which is the same skill the listening passage was about.

A name to know

Charles-Michel de l'Épée (1712–89), a French priest, is held to be the father of sign language and of deaf Education.

The second poem

Weigh Your Words, by E. F. Hayward.

Its argument, stanza by stanza:

  1. If we weighed the words we say and spoke only those we mean, we would save a great deal of talk each day and keep our conscience clean.
  2. The idle words we speak and the promises we make, if believed by somebody weak, may cause a heart to ache.
  3. There is no telling what hurt and smart an idle word can set going; and we can never erase anything we have written on a heart.
  4. It is best to weigh each sentence well — we would not have so much to tell, but it would mean a whole lot more.

How the two poems differ

Words (Swain) Weigh Your Words (Hayward)
The complaint Words fail to satisfy Words do damage
Who suffers The speaker, unsatisfied The listener, hurt
The remedy None offered Weigh each sentence
The ending Blossom with no fruit Less to tell, meaning more

The first poem is about emptiness and the second about harm, and that is a real difference. Swain's speaker is disappointed; Hayward's reader is wounded, and the wound cannot be undone — we never can erase one thing we've written on a heart.

But they arrive at the same place. Swain says a little said and truly said is worth more than hosts of words; Hayward says we would have less to tell, and it would mean a whole lot more. One reaches it by complaint and the other by advice.

Concepts and terms

Declamation contest

A speaking competition in which a speaker delivers a piece with force and expression. The conversation in the listening task turns on which topic suits one.

Topic sentence

The opening sentence of a body paragraph, which states the point that paragraph will make. Everything after it supports that one point.

Transition words

Words and phrases joining one paragraph to the next — in addition to, for instance, however, consequently, finally.

Counterargument

A paragraph that states a possible criticism of the essay's own quotation and then gives the reason the criticism is baseless.

Non-verbal communication

Expression and gesture carrying meaning without speech. The lesson's game tests it directly, and the listening passage argues for its importance.

What Students Get Wrong

Did you know

Each enactment in the Non-verbal game lasts thirty seconds, and a correct identification is worth ten points.

Two of the eight quotations — Gandhi's and Dickinson's — argue that silence or wordlessness can say more than speech.

Walt Whitman's line dismisses his own book: the words nothing, the drift of it everything.

Memory tricks

The listening task — Four true, two false. — And the two false ones are both about body language and the book.

The essay — Introduce, argue, argue, object, conclude. — Five paragraphs, and the fourth is the hard one.

The second poem — Weigh, then speak. — Less to tell, and a great deal more meant.

Practice MCQs with answers (27)

Q1 A student marks all six listening statements as true. What has gone wrong? intermediate
  • A The statements must be ranked rather than marked
  • B Only one of the six is true
  • C The statements refer to a different recording
  • D The instruction is to mark four; two of the six are false
Show answer
Answer: The instruction is to mark four; two of the six are false
Why:

The count is given in advance as a check.

Q2 A student ticks the statement that the girl refused to take part. Which of the six statements is true of her instead? intermediate
  • A That she thought body language played an insignificant role
  • B That she had issued the book on body language earlier
  • C That she chose the topic herself
  • D That she was excited to participate in the declamation contest
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Answer: That she was excited to participate in the declamation contest
Why:

The last two are the task's false statements.

Q3 The boy in the conversation raises a doubt. What is it about? intermediate
  • A Whether the topic chosen suited the contest
  • B Whether the girl would take part at all
  • C Whether the contest would be held
  • D Whether the library held the book
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Answer: Whether the topic chosen suited the contest
Why:

One of the four true statements.

Q4 A student suggests the contest topic failed because it was too difficult. What reason does the girl actually give? advanced
  • A That the topic had been used in a previous year
  • B That the judges had asked for something lighter
  • C That she had not had time to prepare it
  • D That people prefer to keep personal experiences to themselves
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Answer: That people prefer to keep personal experiences to themselves
Why:

Which is why the suitability of the topic was in question.

Q5 What did the boy not know, according to the listening passage? advanced
  • A The date of the declamation contest
  • B The name of the book the girl mentioned
  • C The role body language plays in showing a speaker's confidence
  • D That the girl intended to take part
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Answer: The role body language plays in showing a speaker's confidence
Why:

The girl argued the opposite of the statement that calls it insignificant.

Q6 A listener remembers only that body language was discussed and that a book was mentioned, and marks both false statements true. What does that show about the task? advanced
  • A It tests the number of speakers in the recording
  • B It tests vocabulary rather than comprehension
  • C It tests whether the listener can repeat the conversation
  • D It tests who held which view and when things happened, not what came up
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Answer: It tests who held which view and when things happened, not what came up
Why:

Neither false statement invents anything; each alters a real detail.

Q7 A speaker is warned that an audience will carry away what they hear, for better or worse. Which of the eight quotations makes that point? intermediate
  • A Homer's
  • B Emily Dickinson's
  • C Walt Whitman's
  • D Gautama Buddha's
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Answer: Gautama Buddha's
Why:

Which is why words should be chosen with care.

Q8 A student wants a quotation arguing that hollow speech should simply be withheld. Which fits? intermediate
  • A Mahatma Gandhi's
  • B Swami Vivekananda's
  • C Martin Luther King Jr.'s
  • D Homer's
Show answer
Answer: Homer's
Why:

Words empty as the wind.

Q9 Three quotations concern absence. Which of them treats silence as a failure rather than a virtue? advanced
  • A Mahatma Gandhi's
  • B Emily Dickinson's
  • C Martin Luther King Jr.'s
  • D Walt Whitman's
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Answer: Martin Luther King Jr.'s
Why:

We will remember the silence of our friends.

Q10 What does Walt Whitman say about his own book? advanced
  • A The words nothing, the drift of it everything
  • B That it should never have been written
  • C That its silence says the most
  • D That it will influence readers for good or ill
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Answer: The words nothing, the drift of it everything
Why:

What a book is about, rather than what it says.

Q11 Which quotation is the outlier among the eight, and why? advanced
  • A Homer's — it is the oldest of the eight
  • B Gandhi's — it concerns prayer rather than speech
  • C Kalpana Chawla's — it is a wish for somebody else and says nothing about words
  • D Vivekananda's — it concerns thought rather than speech
Show answer
Answer: Kalpana Chawla's — it is a wish for somebody else and says nothing about words
Why:

Its inclusion lets a student choose for what a quotation does.

Q12 Assertion (A): The speaking task is satisfied by naming a preference and stopping there. Reason (R): Every one of the five sentence cues supplied ends in a reason. advanced
  • A Both A and R are true, and R is the correct explanation of A
  • B Both A and R are true, but R is not the correct explanation of A
  • C A is true but R is false
  • D A is false but R is true
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Answer: A is false but R is true
Why:

A reason is required every time, so the assertion is false. The reason points to the cues that require it.

Q13 A student begins an essay by summarising the whole argument to come. What should the introduction do instead? intermediate
  • A Name the quotation and speaker, say why it appealed, and state the purpose
  • B State a possible criticism of the quotation
  • C Give the first body paragraph's evidence
  • D Leave a lasting impression on the reader
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Answer: Name the quotation and speaker, say why it appealed, and state the purpose
Why:

Summarising belongs at the end, not the beginning.

Q14 A body paragraph opens with an example and only later says what the example is for. Which instruction has been missed? intermediate
  • A That each body paragraph contain two points rather than one
  • B That each body paragraph open with a topic sentence stating its point
  • C That each body paragraph quote a second speaker
  • D That each body paragraph end with a question
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Answer: That each body paragraph open with a topic sentence stating its point
Why:

Evidence, examples or narratives then support it.

Q15 Consider these statements about the essay's fourth paragraph. 1. It states a possible criticism of the quotation. 2. It gives the reason that criticism is baseless. 3. It summarises the two body paragraphs. Which of them are correct? advanced
  • A 1 and 2 only
  • B 1 and 3 only
  • C 2 and 3 only
  • D 1, 2 and 3
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Answer: 1 and 2 only
Why:

Summarising belongs to the conclusion.

Q16 Why is the counterargument the hardest paragraph to write? advanced
  • A It must be longer than the other four
  • B It must quote a second speaker
  • C It must be written before the introduction
  • D Every other paragraph can be written by somebody who simply agrees
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Answer: Every other paragraph can be written by somebody who simply agrees
Why:

An essay that only defends its quotation has argued with nobody.

Q17 A student supplies an objection so weak it collapses in a sentence. Why is that worse than omitting it? advanced
  • A It makes the essay exceed the required length
  • B It advertises that the writer could not think of a real one, or did not want to
  • C It breaks the rule about transition words
  • D It repeats the introduction
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Answer: It advertises that the writer could not think of a real one, or did not want to
Why:

The paragraph requires working out what a dissenter would actually say.

Q18 Which transition word signals a turn against what has just been said? intermediate
  • A However
  • B Consequently
  • C In addition to
  • D For instance
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Answer: However
Why:

Consequently signals a result instead.

Q19 Why does choosing the wrong transition word misdirect a reader? advanced
  • A Transition words must match the quotation chosen
  • B Each word may be used only once in an essay
  • C The reader takes the signal before reading the sentence that follows
  • D Transition words determine paragraph length
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Answer: The reader takes the signal before reading the sentence that follows
Why:

However atop a paragraph that agrees leaves them hunting for a contradiction.

Q20 A group is told the enactment must be over before a fixed short time is up. How long is allowed? intermediate
  • A One minute
  • B Thirty seconds
  • C Ten seconds
  • D Two minutes
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Answer: Thirty seconds
Why:

A correct identification scores ten points.

Q21 In the Non-verbal game, who scores the ten points? advanced
  • A The player who is enacting the slip
  • B Whoever identifies the expression or gesture first
  • C The group that finishes first
  • D The player who wrote the slip
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Answer: Whoever identifies the expression or gesture first
Why:

So the game rewards reading somebody as much as expressing oneself.

Q22 What does the Non-verbal game demonstrate in relation to the poem? advanced
  • A That gestures are always clearer than speech
  • B That the poem was written to be acted
  • C That something gets through even with words removed entirely
  • D That silence is impossible in a group
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Answer: That something gets through even with words removed entirely
Why:

A stronger version of the poem's claim than the poem makes.

Q23 A student is asked which figure in this unit is honoured for work with deaf pupils. Who is it, and when did he live? intermediate
  • A An English poet of the nineteenth century, honoured for teaching the blind
  • B An American teacher of the twentieth century, honoured for lip-reading
  • C A French priest of the eighteenth century, honoured as the father of sign language
  • D A French physician of the seventeenth century, honoured for hearing aids
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Answer: A French priest of the eighteenth century, honoured as the father of sign language
Why:

Charles-Michel de l'Epee, 1712 to 1789.

Q24 A student claims that a careless remark can always be taken back later. Which line of the second poem contradicts that outright? advanced
  • A That weighing our words would keep our conscience clean
  • B That we never can erase one thing we have written on a heart
  • C That we would not have so much to tell
  • D That idle words are spoken every day
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Answer: That we never can erase one thing we have written on a heart
Why:

The sting of a careless remark is never known to the person who caused it.

Q25 A reader asks how the two poems differ in who suffers. What is the answer? advanced
  • A In both poems the listener is wounded
  • B In Swain the speaker is disappointed; in Hayward the listener is wounded
  • C In Swain the listener is wounded; in Hayward the speaker is
  • D Neither poem names anybody who suffers
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Answer: In Swain the speaker is disappointed; in Hayward the listener is wounded
Why:

One poem is about emptiness, the other about harm.

Q26 Where do the two poems arrive at the same place? advanced
  • A Both compare words to plants that bear no fruit
  • B Both end in an exclamation mark
  • C Both prefer a little said sincerely to a great deal said carelessly
  • D Both say that silence is always best
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Answer: Both prefer a little said sincerely to a great deal said carelessly
Why:

Less to tell, and it would mean a whole lot more.

Q27 A student asks what the second poem promises would follow from speaking only what one means. What does it say? advanced
  • A A good deal of talk would be saved, and the conscience kept clean
  • B Nobody would ever be misunderstood again
  • C The speaker would be admired by everybody
  • D Poetry would come more easily
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Answer: A good deal of talk would be saved, and the conscience kept clean
Why:

The claim of its opening stanza.

Important short questions (6)

Give the four true statements of the listening task, and explain how the two false ones are constructed.

The true ones are that the girl was excited to participate in the declamation contest. That the boy was doubtful about the suitability of the topic chosen. That she explained people prefer to keep personal experiences to themselves. And that the boy was unaware of the role body language plays in reflecting a speaker's confidence. The two false statements are built out of real material rather than invention. One takes a subject the girl genuinely discussed — body language — and reverses her position on it; the other takes a book that genuinely appears in the conversation and moves it in time. A listener who retains only the topics will mark both true.

What is the listening task really testing, and how does the stated number of true statements help?

It is testing who held which view and when things happened, rather than what subjects came up. That is the harder thing to hear, because a topic registers at once while an attribution has to be held in mind through the rest of the conversation. The stated number helps because it is a built-in check: a listener who has marked five statements knows immediately that one of them must be wrong, without being told which, and can go back to the recording to find it.

Three of the eight quotations concern absence. Identify them and explain how one differs from the other two.

Gandhi says it is a heart with no words in prayer is worth more than words with no heart behind them. Dickinson says that saying nothing sometimes says the most. And King says that what stays with us at the last is not what our enemies said but what our friends did not. Gandhi's and Dickinson's treat wordlessness as a virtue — something chosen, and better than speech would have been. King's is the opposite: his silence is a failure, a thing that ought to have been broken, and it is remembered as a reproach rather than admired.

Set out the five paragraphs of the essay and the job each performs.

The introduction names the quotation and its speaker, says briefly why it appealed to the writer, and states the purpose of the essay. The second and third paragraphs each develop one specific point, opening with a topic sentence and supported by evidence, examples or narratives, with transition words joining them. The fourth states a possible criticism of the quotation and gives the reason that criticism is baseless. The fifth summarises the main points made in the body and ends with a statement designed to leave a lasting impression.

Explain why the counterargument paragraph is the hard one, and why it cannot be faked.

Because every other paragraph can be written by somebody who simply agrees with the quotation, and this one cannot. An essay that only defends its quotation has argued with nobody: it reads as a set of reasons for something the reader was never invited to doubt, and a reader who did doubt it stopped reading long before. Stating the strongest objection tells the reader that the writer has been outside their own position and come back, which is the difference between praise and a case. It cannot be faked because a weak objection, knocked down in a sentence, advertises that the writer either could not think of a real one or preferred not to.

Describe the Non-verbal game and explain what it demonstrates about the poem's subject.

In groups of six, each student writes or draws an expression on one slip and a gesture on another. The slips are jumbled and kept face down; players pick in turns and enact what they get in thirty seconds, and the first person to identify it scores ten points. Two rounds decide the Non-verbal Champion, and the game is a form of Dumb Charades. What it demonstrates is a stronger version of the poem's own claim. The poem argues that a great many words may fail to communicate; the game takes words away altogether and something still gets through, in half a minute, well enough to be scored. And since the points go to whoever identifies it first rather than to the performer, it rewards reading another person as much as expressing oneself.

Long answer questions (2)

Describe the listening and speaking tasks of this lesson, and explain what each is designed to train.

The listening task. A girl and a boy discuss a declamation contest, and six statements are printed with the instruction to mark the four that are true.

The true ones are that the girl was excited to take part. That the boy doubted whether the chosen topic suited the contest. That she explained people prefer to keep personal experiences to themselves. And that he had been unaware of the part body language plays in reflecting a speaker's confidence. The two false ones are that she considered body language insignificant, which reverses her actual view, and that she had already issued the book on it, which she had not.

What it trains is attribution. Neither false statement invents anything: each takes real material from the conversation and alters who said it or when it happened. A listener who retains only body language came up and there was a book will mark both true. The task therefore forces the listener to hold not just subjects but positions and sequence, which is far harder.

The stated number is part of the design. Announcing that exactly four are true gives the listener an immediate check — five ticks means one is wrong — so the exercise contains its own correction.

The speaking task. Eight quotations are given, from Buddha, Martin Luther King Jr., Vivekananda, Gandhi, Kalpana Chawla, Homer, Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman. The student picks the one they like most, explains it, and gives the reason for the choice, with a connected personal experience if they have one.

The eight are carefully unalike. Buddha and Homer counsel restraint; Gandhi and Dickinson find value in wordlessness; King finds silence a failure rather than a virtue; Vivekananda and Whitman move behind words to thought and to drift; and Chawla's says nothing about words at all, being a wish for somebody else.

What this trains is explanation rather than taste. All five sentence cues supplied — I chose… because, I selected… since, I decided on… due to, I picked… as, I settled for… because — end in a reason, so a student who simply announces a favourite has not done the exercise. And because the eight disagree with one another, choosing any one of them commits the speaker to something the others deny.

Set out the essay structure this lesson prescribes and explain why its fourth paragraph is the one that matters most.

The structure. Five paragraphs, on one quotation from the speaking activity.

The introduction mentions the quotation and the speaker, says briefly why it appealed, and states the purpose of the essay. The second and third paragraphs each explain one specific point related to the quotation, each beginning with a topic sentence that introduces that point and each supported by evidence, examples or narratives, with transition words ensuring a smooth flow — in addition to, for instance, however, consequently, finally. The fourth thinks of a possible criticism of the quotation and gives the reason that criticism is baseless. The fifth summarises the main points and ends with a statement leaving a lasting impression.

Why the fourth matters most. Every other paragraph can be produced by a writer who agrees with the quotation from the first line to the last. The introduction says why it appealed; the body paragraphs give reasons for it; the conclusion restates them. A student could write four-fifths of the essay without ever admitting that anybody in the world thinks otherwise.

An essay in that condition has argued with nobody. It reads as a list of reasons for a position the reader was never invited to question, and the one reader who does question it will have put the essay down before the third paragraph, since nothing in it acknowledges that they exist.

Stating the strongest objection changes the piece entirely. It tells the reader that the writer has been outside their own position, looked back at it, and returned — which is precisely the difference between praise and a case.

And it cannot be faked. A feeble objection, knocked over in a sentence, is worse than none: it advertises that the writer either could not think of a real one or did not want to look for it. The paragraph demands genuinely working out what somebody who disagreed would say, which is a different mental act from anything the other four require.

A note on the transitions. These are not ornament either. Each names a relation — more of the same, an example, a turn, a result, a close — and a reader takes that signal before reading the sentence it introduces. However placed above a paragraph that in fact agrees with the last one sends the reader hunting for a contradiction that never arrives.

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What is the listening passage about, and what does the instruction ask?
A conversation between a girl and a boy about a declamation contest. Six statements are printed and the instruction is to mark the four that are true.
Give the four true statements in the listening task.
That she was looking forward to taking part in the contest; that the boy questioned whether the chosen subject suited it; that she explained people prefer to keep what is personal to themselves; and that he had not realised how much a speaker's bearing conveys about confidence.
Give the two false statements and say why each fails.
That she considered a speaker's bearing to be of little account, which inverts the view she actually argued; and that she had taken the book on the subject out of the library beforehand, which she had not done.
How are the two false statements built, and why does that make them difficult?
Neither invents anything. One takes a subject the girl genuinely discussed and reverses her position on it; the other takes a book that genuinely appears in the conversation and moves it in time. A listener who remembers only that body language was mentioned and that there was a book will mark both true and be wrong twice.
What is the listening task really testing?
Not whether the topics came up but who held which view and when things happened. That is much harder to hear, because a topic registers immediately while an attribution has to be held in mind.
Why does it help that the number of true statements is given in advance?
Because it is a built-in check. A listener who has marked five knows without being told that one of them is wrong, and can go back to the recording. The count turns the task into its own partial answer key.
Give the eight speakers whose quotations are set for the speaking task.
Gautama Buddha, Martin Luther King Jr., Swami Vivekananda, Mahatma Gandhi, Kalpana Chawla, Homer, Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman.
What do Buddha and Homer have in common among the eight?
Both are about restraint. Buddha says words should be chosen with care because people will be influenced by them for good or ill; Homer says words empty as the wind are best left unsaid.
Three of the quotations concern absence. Which, and how does one differ from the other two?
Gandhi's heart without words, Dickinson's saying nothing, and King's silence of our friends. Gandhi's and Dickinson's treat wordlessness as a virtue; King's silence is a failure, since what we will remember is that our friends said nothing when they should have spoken.
How do Vivekananda and Whitman move behind words?
Vivekananda says we are what our thoughts have made us, so it is thinking rather than speaking that is decisive. Whitman calls the words of his book nothing and the drift of it everything, so what a book is about matters more than what it says.
Which of the eight quotations is the outlier, and why is it included?
Kalpana Chawla's, which says nothing about words at all — it is a wish for somebody else, of vision to find the path from dreams to success, courage to get on to it and perseverance to follow it. Including it allows a student to choose a quotation for what it does rather than for what it argues.
What do the five sentence cues for the speaking task have in common?
Every one of them ends in a reason — I chose it because, I selected it since, I decided on it due to, I picked it as, I settled for it because. The task will not accept a preference by itself.
Give the five paragraphs of the essay and the job of each.
The introduction mentions the quotation and the speaker, says briefly why it appealed and states the purpose of the essay. Paragraphs two and three each make one specific point, opening with a topic sentence and supported by evidence, examples or narratives. The fourth states a possible criticism of the quotation and gives the reason it is baseless. The fifth summarises the main points and ends with a statement leaving a lasting impression.
Name the transition words the lesson gives, and say what each signals.
In addition to signals more of the same; for instance signals an example of what was just claimed; however signals a turn against what was just said; consequently signals a result of it; and finally signals the last item.
Why does using the wrong transition word matter?
Because a reader takes the signal before reading the sentence that follows it. However at the head of a paragraph which in fact agrees with the previous one leaves the reader briefly lost, looking for a contradiction that is not there.
Why is the counterargument the hard paragraph?
Because everything else in the structure can be written by somebody who simply agrees with the quotation, and paragraph four cannot. An essay that only defends its quotation has argued with nobody: it reads as reasons for something the reader was never invited to doubt, and a reader who did doubt it has stopped reading. Stating the strongest objection tells the reader the writer has been outside their own position and come back.
Why can the counterargument not be faked?
Because a weak objection, easily knocked down, is worse than none at all — it advertises that the writer either could not think of a real one or did not want to. The paragraph requires genuinely working out what somebody who disagreed would say.
Describe the Non-verbal game.
In groups of six, each student writes or draws an expression on one slip and a gesture on another. The slips are jumbled and kept face down. Players pick in turns and enact what they get in thirty seconds, and the first person to identify it scores ten points. Two rounds decide the Non-verbal Champion. Tired is given as an example expression and united as an example gesture.
Who scores in the Non-verbal game, and why is that worth noticing?
Points go to whoever identifies the expression or gesture first, not to the person acting it out. The game therefore rewards reading somebody else as much as expressing oneself — which is the same skill the listening passage was concerned with.
What has the Non-verbal game to do with the poem?
The poem argues that a great many words can fail to communicate. The game removes words entirely and asks whether anything gets through — and something does, in thirty seconds, well enough to score. That is a stronger version of the poem's own claim than the poem itself makes.
What is the game compared to, and what is that game?
Dumb Charades, a word-guessing game in which players put across a word, a phrase or a film title by gesture alone, without a sound, while their teammates try to guess what is being mimed.
Who is Charles-Michel de l'Épée, and what are his dates?
A French priest, 1712 to 1789, recognised as the Father of Sign Language and Deaf Education.
Set out the argument of Weigh Your Words, stanza by stanza.
If we weighed the words we say and spoke only those we mean, we would spare ourselves a great deal of talking and keep a clear conscience. The idle words we speak and the promises, once somebody defenceless takes them seriously, can leave a heart aching. There is no telling what hurt and smart an idle word can set going, and we can never erase one thing we have written on a heart. It is best to weigh each sentence well: we would not have so much to tell, but it would mean a whole lot more.
Compare Words with Weigh Your Words.
Swain's poem is about emptiness and Hayward's about harm. In Swain, words fail to satisfy and the speaker is disappointed; in Hayward, words do damage and the listener is wounded, and the wound cannot be undone since nothing written on a heart can be erased. Swain offers no remedy; Hayward tells us to weigh each sentence. Yet both arrive at the same place — a little said and truly said against hosts of words, and less to tell but meaning a whole lot more.

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Class 9 English Chapter 15 — frequently asked questions

Explain the comparison between words and summer birds, and say what it establishes.

Words are said to be like summer birds, which makes it a simile. The comparison holds in three ways: summer birds arrive, they are lovely while they are there, and they go when the season turns. What they leave behind is empty air — not a loss and not a ruin, but simply nothing. It establishes the poem's first and mildest complaint about words, that they do no injury at all and merely fail to remain. The stronger charges come later.

Why is the heart called a pilgrim, and how does the image affect the rest of the stanza?

It is a metaphor rather than a simile, since the line says the heart is a pilgrim. A pilgrim is somebody permanently travelling towards something not yet reached, so the image explains why words are wanted at all: a heart in that condition needs something from outside itself. The stanza then turns on the phrase when it needs, which is easily passed over and is the hinge of the argument. Words are not being called worthless in general — they are found worth as little as weeds exactly when they are required, which is worse than being worthless always.

Why is stanza 3 called the turn of the poem?

Because it prevents the poem from being a complaint about language. A little said, and truly said, can impart deeper joy than hosts of words — so words themselves are not the difficulty; too many of them are, and untrue ones. The stanza also supplies the distinction on which everything else rests, between words that reach the head and words that touch the heart. A great many can be understood; very few are felt, and nothing about the first guarantees the second.

Name the three similes in the poem, and say what they have in common.

Words are like summer birds that depart; words are of as little worth as just so many weeds; and words are like plants that make a gaudy show. All three use like or as, which is what makes them similes. What they have in common is that each is drawn from something that grows or flies, and each ends in disappointment — something that leaves, something worthless, and something that deceives. The poem grows steadily harder on its subject while never changing the kind of comparison it uses.

Why does the heart, and not words, receive the poem's only metaphor?

Because a metaphor states an identity rather than a likeness, and stating an identity is the stronger and warmer of the two moves. The similes all describe words, which the poem holds at arm's length and finally accuses of deceiving; the heart is the subject the poem is on the side of, and it alone is given the outright claim — the heart is a pilgrim upon earth. The distribution of the devices therefore tracks the poem's sympathies exactly.

Give the four answers to the hyperbole exercise and explain why the rejected options are the difficulty.

Tonnes of things to do; missed the basket by a mile; could sleep for a decade; back in two seconds. The rejected options — lots of, an inch, a night, five minutes — are the difficulty because every one of them is perfectly sensible, and a student looking for a reasonable answer will choose it. That plausibility is exactly what disqualifies them. A hyperbole is not an approximate statement but a deliberately impossible one, and its force depends on the listener recognising the impossibility; missed by a mile says the shot was hopeless, where missed by an inch says it nearly went in.

Give the four true statements of the listening task, and explain how the two false ones are constructed.

The true ones are that the girl was excited to participate in the declamation contest. That the boy was doubtful about the suitability of the topic chosen. That she explained people prefer to keep personal experiences to themselves. And that the boy was unaware of the role body language plays in reflecting a speaker's confidence. The two false statements are built out of real material rather than invention. One takes a subject the girl genuinely discussed — body language — and reverses her position on it; the other takes a book that genuinely appears in the conversation and moves it in time. A listener who retains only the topics will mark both true.

What is the listening task really testing, and how does the stated number of true statements help?

It is testing who held which view and when things happened, rather than what subjects came up. That is the harder thing to hear, because a topic registers at once while an attribution has to be held in mind through the rest of the conversation. The stated number helps because it is a built-in check: a listener who has marked five statements knows immediately that one of them must be wrong, without being told which, and can go back to the recording to find it.

Three of the eight quotations concern absence. Identify them and explain how one differs from the other two.

Gandhi says it is a heart with no words in prayer is worth more than words with no heart behind them. Dickinson says that saying nothing sometimes says the most. And King says that what stays with us at the last is not what our enemies said but what our friends did not. Gandhi's and Dickinson's treat wordlessness as a virtue — something chosen, and better than speech would have been. King's is the opposite: his silence is a failure, a thing that ought to have been broken, and it is remembered as a reproach rather than admired.

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